Last Seen 11:11 PM
Last Seen 11:11 PM
Setting: Personal WhatsApp (Hyderabad / Telangana).
In English: Last Seen 11:11 PM. A Lighted Tales original Telugu horror story, written in Romanized Telugu (Tenglish) with Telangana dialect.
Last Seen 11:11 PM
Madhumati: "Roopa, naaku oka favor cheyyali. Naa phone lo Sandeep chat ni nuvvu open chesi chudali. Naa phone lo aa chat last seen daily 11:11 PM ki update aytundi. Sandeep ne 2023 lo poyiyaru."
Roopa: "Madhu, eppudo poyina vaalla number ki last seen?"
Madhumati: "Adhe naaku ardham kaavadhamledu. Aa number ippativaraku service lo undi laaga undi. WhatsApp lo profile picture undi, status undi. Daily 11:11 PM ki online avuthundi."
Roopa: "Block chesava?"
Madhumati: "Cheyaledu Roopa. Block cheste aa chat poolu poyinattu anipistundi. Adhe last memory."
Roopa: "Mute chesi chudu first."
Madhumati 24 years aame. Gachibowli lo Sneha Ladies PG lo, single-occupancy room. IT recruiter, oka MNC ki contractor. Roopa aame roommate floor pakka, age same, Pune nunchi vacchina marketing executive.
Sandeep — Madhumati's ex-boyfriend. 2020 lo college lo kalichaaru, 2022 ki break-up, 2023 March lo Sandeep liver failure tho 26 years lone age lo poyiyaru. Heavy drinking — Madhumati break-up reason adhe. Aame aa break-up roju chedda matalu annaru — "nuvvu ila trag chesi chesi povali". Adhi aame chivariki cheppina maata. Sandeep poyina news vinna roju aame aa maata gurthu chesindhi, edichindi, nidra povaledhu okka week.
Aa chat WhatsApp lo ippativaraku undi — break-up tarwata block cheyaledu, Sandeep poyaaka delete cheyaledu. Profile picture aa same — Sandeep oka beach photo, Goa, 2021 December, navvuthune. Aame ki adhi memory antha. Aa chat open chesi, last 200 messages chadivedaaniki time pattedi aame ki — 6 months oka saari aatlanti binge-read.
Aa chat lo "last seen" — 2023 March 14 ki 6:42 PM ki freeze ayipoindi. Sandeep poyina time. Aame aa freeze ni acceptance ga adopt chesindi.
Kaani 2025 May lo, oka night, aame phone scroll chesthuntey aa chat midha "last seen 11:11 PM" ani vundi.
Aame heart aa second lo skipping ayyindi. Aame aa number reverse search chesindi — Truecaller lo, contact details lo. Adhe number, 2023 March nunchi unde adhe.
Phone settings lo "service status" check chesedaaniki ela cheyali ani teliyaledu. Aa night nidra povaledhu.
Next day evening 8 PM ki phone open chesi chusindi — last seen still 11:11 PM, May previous day di.
Day-3, day-4, day-5 — prathi roju 11:11 PM ki update.
Daily 11:11 PM. Same time. Andhuke ne ekkuva ekkuva, ne thakkuva thakkuva. Pakka 11:11 PM.
Aa night Madhumati Roopa ki cheppina tarwata, Roopa aa phone teesi chusindi. Roopa face neram laeni vidham ga, kaani serious ga marindhi. Aame phone tirigi Madhumati ki ichindi.
Roopa: "Madhu, mute chesi chudu. Maybe phone notification gnaa irritate avuthundi, mute chesthe peace ga undali."
Madhumati mute pettindi — "Mute notifications" → "Always". Tarwata icon meeda chinna ga speaker-cross gurtu vacchindi.
Aa raathri 11:00 PM ki Madhumati nidra povaboyindhi. Phone bedside table midha pakkana. Lights off chesindi.
11:11 PM ki — phone vibrate ayyindi. Mute lo unna kuda. Adhi vibration, ringtone kaadu — kaani notification kosam aa vibration kuda not allowed mute lo. Madhumati lechi phone chusindhi — aa Sandeep chat lo "online" ani show ayyindi.
→ Idey theme lo inka oka katha: Unknown Number Forward
Aame chusthune typing... ani vacchindi.
Aame chest meeda baruvu padi unnattu, breath teesukoladaaniki effort ayyindi.
Inka 4 seconds tarwata — message vacchindi —
Madhu, mute chesina kaani okay-le. Naadhi voice nuvvu vinaboyethe ila phone vibrate aythune.
Madhumati phone padipoyindi mancham midha. Aame Roopa room tho touch lo undadaaniki message chesindhi panic ga, kaani Roopa daggara reply raavadham ki 30 seconds time pattindi.
[ROOPA - WHATSAPP] "Madhu, kaalava? Naa room ki ravu."
Madhumati phone teesi corridor lo nadi nadi Roopa room cherindi. Roopa door theesi pakka ki vacchindi. Madhumati cheyi shake aythune.
Madhumati: "Roopa, mute lo kuda message vacchindi. Vibration. Phone elaa adhi do chesindhi naaku ardham kaavadhamledu."
Roopa: "Madhu, calm down. Network glitch ai unde."
Aa moment lo Madhumati phone tirigi vibrate ayyindi. Roopa chethi lo phone tisukundi. Screen meeda Sandeep chat — inkoka message —
Roopa-amma, nuvvu prashantha ga undu. Naadhi maatalu naa Madhu ki maatrame. Adhi business yelaa ne ne nuvvy.
Roopa phone padipoyindi, edukundi, room corner ki velli koorchunde. Aame chevulu chevula meeda pettukunindhi.
Roopa: "Madhu, maa amma ki cheppali, Hyderabad nunchi nenu transfer adigaali office lo. Naaku ee place lo undalaeni."
Madhumati Roopa pakkana koorchundi, rendu vidaalaa edichaaru.
Madhumati next day morning 9 AM ki maa Karimnagar lo unna oka family-priest Bhagavatulu garu ki phone chesindhi. Bhagavatulu garu Madhumati's father side family ki priest, 40 years baseline. Aame andhuke Telugu lo cheppindhi anni — phone, last seen, message, mute.
[BHAGAVATULU - PHONE] "Madhu amma, Sandeep babu nuvvu break-up time lo annapudu chedda matalu, adhi atani manasu meeda kontha guruti vesi unde. Nuvvu ee 2 years lo aa matala kosam kshamapana adgaledu kadha?"
Madhumati: "Adugaledu Bhagavatulu garu. Aatanu poyaaka adugaali ani ardham kaaledu. Phone meeda message panpaali ane ide-na lekapoyindi."
Bhagavatulu: "Atani number meeda chat lo nuvvy oka kshamapana panpu , Sandeep ki, atani nuvvu chedda matalu annaru ani, atani poyaaka aa matalu nokkukunde ani, ippudu kshamapana adugutuna ani. Type chesi sendu. Cheyyamma. Nee chethulu kadhulutay, chetulu thopukoki, kaani type chesi sendu. Send aythe nee daggara nundi prarabdha chethanga ga padipoyindani feel avutadi nee ki."
Madhumati phone teesi, aa chat open chesi, type chesindhi. Hands trembled. Sentence break-up. Punctuation tappulu. Kaani type chesi 6 messages ga sendu chesindhi —
Sandeep, naaku oka maata cheppali. Aa break-up roju nuvvu trag chesi chesi povali ani annanu, aa maata nenu aa second ki ardham kaani anger lo annanu. Adhi naa life lo regret. Nuvvu poyaaka aa matalu naaku gurthuvachi prati saari naa chest baruvuga ayyindhi. Naaku kshamapana ivvavu. Naaku oka chance ivvu prashanthi ga undadaaniki. Idhi naa final message ne ki. Naa ne nuvvu vidiche ee chat ni nenu kuda ippudu vidustha — block chestha, archive chestha. Naadhi nuvvu paatadu meeda peace tho undali.
Send chesindhi. Single grey, double grey, double blue. 5 seconds — typing... — 8 seconds — silent.
Reply raaledhu.
Madhumati 30 minutes wait chesindhi. Reply ledu. 1 hour. Reply ledu.
→ Pakkana ee story kuda chadavandi: Admin Delete Chesindu
Aa chat ni Madhumati settings lo veelaipoyi block chesindhi. Block this contact — aa pop-up ki Yes ani kottindhi. Chat archive lo padindi automatic ga.
Aame phone padyam chesi mancham midha pettindi. Roopa room pakka nunchi tea cup tho vacchindi. Iddaru moogaga koorchunde 20 minutes.
Aa night 11:11 PM. Madhumati phone vibrate aledhu.
11:12 PM. Lekapoyindi.
11:13 PM. Lekapoyindi.
Aame nidra ki kalalu poyindhi.
Two days tarwata, Madhumati blocked chats list open chesindhi — Sandeep number ippativaraku akkadane undi, kaani profile picture default grey silhouette ki maaripoyindi. Profile photo lo Goa beach photo gone. Status — empty. Last seen — visible kaadu, blocked kabatti.
Real-world context: Wikipedia — Creepypasta tradition
Adhi correct. Adhi natural. Adhi proper closure.
Roopa transfer cheskoledu. Aame Hyderabad lo undi poyindi. Madhumati Sandeep gurinchi tarwata 6 months daka mention cheyaledhu — bhayam ki kaadu, antha simple ga aa subject inka stir cheyali ani anipinchaledhu. Aame friends, family, work — aa chat block chesina day nunchi sleep schedule normal ki vacchindhi.
Daa prarabdha — aame Sandeep ki cheppale-poyina aa chedda matalu, ee 2 years aame manasu meeda baruvu ga undinde. Aame block chesina moment lo aa baruvu padipoyindi — aame end ga oka kshamapana cheppindhi, aa kshamapana receive ayyindo leda telidhu, kaani aame side ga puri chesindi.
Madhumati ippudu Roopa ki oka rule cheppindhi PG lo —
Madhumati: "Evvariki kuda chedda matalu cheppakandi. Adhi okka second lo annaalu, atham 10 years tarwata kuda manasulo wait avtundi. Adhe last memory ayipothundi."
Author's note
Naa college time lo, 2010 ganam lo, naa oka close friend Sravan tho oka chedda fight jarigindi exam stress lo. Nenu chedda matalu annaanu — adhi correct ga kuda gurthu ledhu naaku ippudu, kaani aa weekend mundu Sravan native ki velli, Karimnagar near, atanu monday morning ki return raaledu. Bike accident, Manair Dam pakkana road, monsoon. Atanu ICU lo 8 days tarwata coma nunchi aatani family ki tirigi vacchaaru — but aa 8 days lo nenu hospital corridor lo prathi minute aa fight ni gurthu chesi pichchi vaadini ayyaanu. Sravan ki cheppanu kshamapana, atanu navvinaaru aa fight gurthuledhu ani — kaani naa daggara nunchi aa baruvu padindi aa kshamapana cheppakaa povaadham appatiki.
Madhumati lanti situation real ga emotional vidham ga unde. WhatsApp chat lo eppudo poyina vaalla messages, photos undadham — aa chat ni delete cheyali ani feel kavaadhamlade, kaani undi poyinappudu kuda guilt baruvu undi. Mee daggara ilaanti chat undha eppudo poyina vaalla nunchi? Block, delete chesarah, lekapothey unchaarah? Comments lo share chesi cheppandi mee experience.
— Sai Kiran · Lighted Tales
© 2026 Sai Kiran Pandrala / Lighted Tales · https://teluguhorrorstories.blogspot.com
Original Telugu horror fiction. Folk-source material where referenced is public domain.
Modern characters, apartments, companies, and phone numbers are fictional.
Any resemblance to real persons, businesses, or events is coincidental.
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